Guest Posted December 21, 2000 Report Share Posted December 21, 2000 tha coming blind stares of those who preparefor the coming of the evil knightbrought upon them is confusion and persecutionthroughout an eternal moonless nightthe preminition of recognition of the silent sailent in the skyprovokes a situation with stakes unseemly hightrouble will evade those who do not pave the way for more desires that will sway the demon from its final gravefor the souls who watch and wait the temptation will be great to desire for the taste that all amongst them must not cravethe burning fires of such desires provide the feast to feed the beast but once desire evaporates and the soul emancipatesthe menace then deterriorates until it is deceased a.kornev [This message has been edited by Alex Kornev (edited December 21, 2000).] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 23, 2000 Report Share Posted December 23, 2000 Well Alex, I had to read it 3-4 times to fully understand it (if I understood it). It is very nice and I am amazed at the depth of this poem. At one point I remembered The Eagles' "hotel California" song... Keep up the good work and let's have some more of your work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 23, 2000 Report Share Posted December 23, 2000 thank you raffi jan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 23, 2000 Report Share Posted December 23, 2000 I think it was very nice when i saw it, I'm well impressed. You are talented beyond your years! It's a shame i couldnt reply sooner. Did you intened to get inspiration from that song? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 23, 2000 Report Share Posted December 23, 2000 thanks Kazza , well i had nothing to do so i decided to bust out a couple of lines of what was on my mind. that version you read is unfinished i added like 8 more lines to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 25, 2000 Report Share Posted December 25, 2000 Alex - I am very impressed I had a friend in high school who wrote poetry. His poems had a similar pattern and theme. Please share more Aneta Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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